I saw the sun shining sharply,
the stream flowing freely,
the wind blowing softly,
the grass laying beneath ceaselessly
through the glorious valley,
as I stood there waiting for you impatiently.
Then I saw you walk towards me breathlessly,
with hair that got a little messy,
yet you came through dashingly.
As you reached there, you look at me lovingly;
took my hand nervously,
got down on one knee charmingly,
asking me to be yours forever bewitchingly.
I said yes, enthusiastically,
as you put a ring on my finger, oh what a beauty!
It was a moment that went flawlessly,
while everything fits in perfectly,
my world seemed complete elegantly,
until I realize it was all an illusion, a delusional fantasy;
a hallucinated fairy tale with no possibility.
The introvert writer ยฉ 2022
So beautiful illusion. So nice words written in.
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Thank you so much Raj! It’s always a delight to see you read my words. ๐ค๐ธ
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Yes,
Of course. I always did.
Thank you so much.๐ท
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You’re welcome Raj! You are a delight. ๐ธ
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Owh, Daph.. what a captivating and tough-twisting piece. I enjoyed the mellifluous flow and then… boom ๐ฅ… “until I realize it was all an illusion, a delusional fantasy…” ๐๐คฃ๐คฃ what a twist! Proves you mastered well this art of writing (twists are beautifully surprising). Did I say how much I enjoyed this? Well i really did. You’re a great poet, a gifted story-teller and, now even overally, a good person to relate with. I looked at that mirror and saw the poem through and through. ๐โค๐๐บ
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Haha… I don’t know why but I really seem to enjoy making a twist, it is oddly satisfying. ๐
I am extremely thrilled and delighted to know you enjoyed reading this Lam and to hear such amazing feedback from you is just so heartwarming. Really blessed to have you. ๐ฅฐ๐ Thank you very much dear for bringing a smile to my face with your lovely words. ๐๐
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You’re most welcome, Daph. ๐๐บI love twists, by the way, especially when they come towards the end of a writing like this, they make a writing memorable to the reader. I do enjoy using them too sometimes. This is just so wonderful indeed. โค
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So sweet of you to say Lam, I am elated to read your comments makes my day. ๐ฅฐ๐๐ธ
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The pleasure is mutual. Ever so grateful. Styles such as these are the flavours of writing.โ ๐๐
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You my friend are too kind and I am grateful for you. ๐ค๐
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Most welcome, Daph, always. ๐๐บ๐
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Ooooh. Masterfully written, Daphny. How splendidly this flowed. Do it again. Please. Thanks. Totally befitting for sure talented poet.
Thanks for sharing. xoxo
Might be just an illusion but remember that your thoughts create your reality. So add to it or send that one out into the universe. The Universe conspires to get you what you want. Believe it. I wish you miracles.
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Selma I am over the moon to read your comment, you are too kind. Thank you so much for such kind words, it is a huge encouragement to me. ๐ฅฐ๐
I will for sure, thank you dearest Selma. I wish you miracles as well. ๐ค
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Beautiful poem Daphny.
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Thank you so much! ๐๐ธ
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My pleasure.
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What a beautiful illusion!
I loved it โญโญโญโญโญ
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Aww.. Thank you so much! That means a lot. ๐ธ๐
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Wow!!!!!! You are such a brilliant writer Daphny! โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Keep writing and keep us inspiring! โบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ
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Thank you so much, that means a lot. ๐๐
Will try my very best. ๐๐
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Aww, what a beautiful poem, dear Daphny. I love it. โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Aww.. Thank you so much Jeff! Really glad you like it. ๐๐
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Youโre most welcome, Daphny. Always! I loved it, my dear friend. ๐๐
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Really glad to hear that, have a lovely week ahead my friend. ๐๐ค
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You accepted him politely
God will bless you, honestly ๐๐๐
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Aww.. Thank you so much dear Jane ๐ฅฐ๐
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You are welcome dear Daphny ๐ฅฐ ๐
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You’re most welcome dear! ๐
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Seriously. Haha. You’re so good at this kind of thingsss. ๐โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Haha… I try my best to stop myself but I can’t help it. ๐คฃ๐
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Very nice, I think you glitched out of my reader view. I was used to you posting sporadically but… I will try to unfollow and refollow, I’ve heard it happens. I missed reading you.
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That glitched is happening to lots of people this days, seems I am the next victim. Thank you so much for letting me know.
Thank you so much ๐ค๐ค๐๐
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I unfollowed and refollowed on your site and today I searched in the reader, said I am following you but tried it there also.
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Thank you so much for letting me know I will check what exactly happened. ๐ค๐ค
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Just send them a mail today waiting for a reply. ๐
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I may have missed you, I am not online as much as I to be. ?
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Better safe than sorry. ๐ค
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a beautiful poem Daphny of a love so true.. ๐๐
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Thank you so much Cindy! ๐ค๐
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You’re so welcome Daphny!
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Beautifully written Daphny. But, a very sad ending!
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Thank you so much Dwight! I guess it’s a reality of life where there isn’t much of a happy ending.
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You are right some things do not have a happy ending no matter how we try to make it so.
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Yeah, sadly they really don’t. Thank you so much for stopping by Dwight. ๐
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