
Wandering souls left behind,
with none to remember them by,
no one to tell their stories,
till they came back to finish
an incomplete tale of a long time ago.
Everyone called them evil,
all feared,
dreading to pass that bridge
they seem to have made it home;
they meant no harm,
only wanted an ear that would listen,
of how they were sacrificed
to protect their loved ones.
Their stories were tainted with lies,
their families put to shame
for deeds they never did;
they were deceived,
by the corrupted lot;
not knowing the evil laid ahead for them.
Their sacrifice remains in vain,
till they came back to unfold the truth
to be heard one last time,
one that was silenced,
till their souls are put to ease.
The introvert writer © 2022
This is a painful and lovely poem, dear Daphny. It reminds me of the stories people create in their minds, versus the reality of what actually happened. Wonderful write, my dear friend. 🥰❤️
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Ah, how truly said. Sometimes we humans tends to judge and create a worst case scenario which happens to far from the truth. Thank you so much dear Jeff, it is always an honor to read your kind words. 🥰❤️
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That’s exactly it, dear Daphny. It’s a great joy to me to resonate with you, my dear friend. Always. 🥰❤️
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It is to me as well dear friend 🥰❤️
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under a bridge
a chair was under there
stood stop stood up
south hill
and the gist
was not
missed we do not like
the queen of england!
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Haha… Such a heartfelt dislike for the queen 😆
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fucikin cunts her and charlie for treating lady di that way. liked her way more for sure.
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I think the whole Nation dislikes them for the way they treated Lady Di, no one in life should go through that.
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nope and the fact that them fuckers is as much german as english well the whole island is full of them tams…
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Hmm.. At least the mass don’t like them
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yup daphny. your name sake said take a picture. should of she was smokin hot even thou she was a jeh s witness. gasp!
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Haha… She actually looked so damn good.
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really wanna go sailing with her? lmao
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No thanks, I’d prefer to be rather stuck in a deserted Island with Trump I can atleast have much more topic to debate with him. 🤣
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what a waste of time
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I can laugh on his terrible hair to keep myself entertained haha
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tsk lover it aintcha hair i m after. lmao
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😆
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just like zimmy joker man is Jesus.
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i can laugh too then i have to cry cos im touchy and pissed too that is why.
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Isn’t that the story of us all
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yes hold me scold me and love me lots .
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i mean a mimosa your book and the waves washing up on . anyway gotta keep it clean and respectful . lmao
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🤣🤣🤣🤣
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yuuuuuuuuuuuup
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I love the depth this adds to a current understanding of ghosts; it packs such a lovely emotional punch and the opening image is perfection!
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Thank you Jaya! ✨
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Beautiful and profound; an aspect that is hardly ever represented. The sadness of ghosts who would like to come back and make us hear their versions of events
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Thank you so much Luisa, you always bless me with your very generous words. 🥰❤️
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You’re highly welcome. 🤗😘💖
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🥰❤️
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If the demons had come back to tell what happened to them, people would have believed in the end and different stories would not have been created.
Beautifully crafted, dear Daphny! ❤️
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Thank you so much dear Jane! 🥰❤️
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You are welcome, dear Daphny! ❤️🥰
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🥰❤️💖🌸
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So touching beautiful a narrative this is! I felt my tears hanging close, feeling the injustice that was done to these wonderful souls. You have captured their situation so well, dear. It is sad how people often try to hide the truth. Oh, i felt those departed souls grieving for the truth. 😢💗💗❤❤
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Thank you so much dear Lam for your very kind and encouraging words, true the world judges very quickly without even knowing the truth while some others hide the truth ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Indeed. This is a sad but truth revealing piece, and I loved it. You’re most welcome. Your imagination is simply great dear❤❤❤❤
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Aww.. That is very kind of you to say, thank you once again 🥰💖
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The pleasure is all mine dear ❤❤
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🥰🤗💝💖
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❤❤
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Such a wonderful story so well created and delivered Dear Daphny. Many layers with lots to ponder. I love it! 💖💖
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Thank you so much, dear Cindy! I am so glad that you loved this one. 🥰❤️
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You’re most welcome dear!!💕
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🙏😇🥰❤️
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A very interesting story poem, Daphny.
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Thank you so much, Dwight!
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sad when this happens to anyone. good people or not. Thanks for sharing. xoxo
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It is, thank you for acknowledging it as well. xoxo
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This is fascinating and brought to mind other ghost tales, most notably Tolkien’s Oathbreakers of Dunharrow (aka the Army of the Dead) whom Aragorn gathered to force them to fulfil their oath by fighting against Sauron’s army in The Lord of the Rings (although in this case, the Oathbreakers were cursed for an unfulfilled promise and were stranded in limbo until that promise was kept). What strikes me is that your poem can also apply to the living. So many people are harshly judged and maligned and made into pariahs through no fault of their own, and end up living on the periphery of humanity, almost like mortal ghosts. We all want the truth to be revealed and our names to be cleared so we can finally rest in peace. This is a really good piece, Daphny. I love that you have an active imagination that can embrace horror themes. So cool! 🙂
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Aww.. This is so much incredible to read Mike, thank you so very much for your extremely kind words and I really loved your interpretation of this. It is so true that even the living have face so much from a mass of judgmental people who knows nothing but to pull down others, I do hope humanity is still alive somewhere out there. Thank you once again and horror has always fascinated me a lot. 😁🙂
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haunting and evocative. 🤩
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Thank you 😄
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