A drop,
a single touch,
still brings out the child in her,
that use to run out
as the first drop of rain hit the earth.
She used to dance in joy as it pours down,
that child got lost as years pass by,
buried deep down in this busy world;
standing in line to compete with the rest,
where only one can win the race.
No joy, no happiness;
she forgot it all,
no more laughter as before
till one day she freed her burdens
dancing in the rain like she once did,
looking forward to a content life
where the race no longer mattered;
everyone was first in their own ways,
a topper in their own success,
each a different path,
each a different story,
with a purpose to win through life.
The introvert writer © 2022
Laugh and dance in the rain, why don’t you, it’s so much fun. Do what makes your heart sing. XoXo
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It is indeed much fun and now I’m back and all set for it. 😁🙂
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the wind blew it cool
and i the fool
saw thru grey clouds
the occult
of slight rain
and then sunshine again!
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You are no fool if through grey clouds you could see, they’ve met their match one they can’t fool.
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the pleasant feeling sent my mind and soul reeling darling.
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Reel it out
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Beautiful read! Thank you 😊
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Thank you so much! 😇
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A wonderfully empowering poem, elegantly expressed, and so beautiful, dear Daphny. ❤️❤️❤️
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Nice dance with smile in rain. Interested poem for rain season. Good enjoyed in rainy.
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Thank you so much Raj! How’s the rain in your side? Hope it’s been kind.
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Here is not now! After 10 th June. 🌤️Here is hot weather 35 to 44c
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Oh, well in one way that is good. Here it haven’t stop raining till now since the beginning of the month.
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Nice you are lucky. Early rainy season. 🌨️🏖️
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It is flooding, too many rain. 😞
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Thank you so much, dear Jeff! Always a great delight to hear from you 🥰❤️
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You’re welcome, dear Daphny. Always! 🥰❤️
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This is so inspiring, Daphny. I loved the change in direction with these lines:
“till one day she freed her burdens
dancing in the rain like she once did…”
It was at this point hope shown through again like the most brilliant god-beam breaking through a storm cloud. I’m glad you’re dancing in the rain again. Don’t ever stop. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Mike! After a long tiring day this just puts a smile in my face, I won’t ever stop again that’s a promise to myself. Thank you once again, your presence is very much appreciated and I am honored by your constant support. 🙂
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Such a wonderful Poem!!!!
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Thank you so much! 😇❤️
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You’re most welcome! 🙏
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😇🥰💝💝
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You look radiant, happy and joyful with your beautiful tye dye top Daphny. Not to mention your fabulous poem bringing the child out to play! I love your words and capture of putting the Yay in my day. Thank you!! 💖👏👏👏
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The rain brings out the best in me I should say, makes me come alive. Thank you so much dear Cindy, you are too kind and sweet and I am glad I can put the Yay in your day 🥰🥰🥰
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Oh yes it does as I can see by your smile. It sure did and you’re so welcome, it’s deserved! 💖
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You are too kind my friend 🥰❤️
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awwww that’s sweet to hear! 💖
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🤗🥰💝💝
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I love the twists in this poem, from happiness to sadness to happiness. Glad the persona found the reasons to once be happy. I often tell people that positivity is the backbone of good health. Such a gorgeous poem, dear Daph 🌺❤🌺❤🌺
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Thank you so much dear, and you are right about it happiness is such a positive backbone to have a good health both mentally and physically. 🥰❤️
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Yes, that’s it, my dearest friend. I can’t imagine I’ve missed reading such beautiful posts. Thank you. Always. 🌺❤🌺
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I have missed reading yours as well, hope you will be posting soon 😁❤️
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Yes. I just posted one tearful piece, tearful depending on the tone and mood one develops. haha. Thanks. Actually it’s joy to reunite. ❤❤
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I just read it and it is a great comeback my friend, you made me tear up. 😥❤️
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Oooh, I hope you didn’t shed some tears. Just a poem it is. Hah. Thanks for taking your time to read anyway, and for writing such a notable compliment. 🥰❤
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Well the words have lots of depts to it, always a pleasure reading your words dear 🤗🥰♥️♥️
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You’re right, they truly do. It is called empathetic writing, taking the format of messages from lyric poems though not one. Thank you again, my dearest friend. ❤❤🥰🤗
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And you my friend are excellent at it, you bring out the best of emotions ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I do? Wow, I’m glad to hear so dear. Thank you. We both do. ❤ ❤
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Yes you most definitely do dear, ah so kind of you to say thank you. 🥰❤️
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You’re welcome, in the best way possible. Thank you too. 😊 🌺 ❤
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You’re welcome dear! 🤗❤️
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Gladly. ❤🙏
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How joyous and full of life this poem is! Delightful a read indeed. ❤️
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Thank you so much! 🥰💝
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It’s rainy season here, I’ll try dancing next it drops… beautiful poem❤️
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Do try it makes you feel alive, thank you 🙂❤️
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Okay dear 🥰
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Have fun and do let me know you’re experience with the rain. #Please don’t get sick though 🙂
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Lol, truth be told ,I was beaten today by Mr rain, we got bad drainage system here, I almost drowned ☺️
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Well a heavy rain is never a pleasure try it on a light rainfall 😁
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Okay dear, but I wasn’t trying to dance under such…was on me way to pick my niece from school
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Oh! Hopefully you didn’t hurt yourself right? How’s the rain now?
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No, I didn’t, it rains everyday
I’m more careful, thanks 🙏
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Beautiful poem and picture.❤️
It’s raining outside 🌦️☔. I would like to dance but time is 12.40am Ⓜ️. I think monsoon started little early.,😊
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Thank you so much, dear Jane! ❤️
Ah yes monsoon started a little early this year, hope you get to dance in the rain during the day. 😊❣️
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Yes, we went to the water park and it rained there. We enjoyed the slides, boating and real rain dance 😄
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That sounds so much fun, haha… Glad you had a real rain dance 😁
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😍😄🥰
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😁😊❤️❤️
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Elegant and refreshing poem! Loved it ❤
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Thank you so much! 😊💞
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