Behind the trees,
up in the hills,
beside the deep untamed river,
stood a cabin in the woods,
surrounded by the echoes of chirping birds.
It was a beauty to look at,
crafted to perfection.
I admire from afar
but dared not to go in.
Why you ask?
Myth has it that some souls still wander there.
Tales from long ago says
a group of friends took each other’s life;
the truth and reason why, no one knows.
All I know is that
a strange force stops one from entering there,
an unexplainable force that’s chilling to the bones.
But the truth of the cabin
and the veracity of its untold secrets
will forever remain a mystery.
#This poem was originally suppose to be a warm and cozy one, the kind where you’re suppose to feel like home but as I start writing it I don’t know how but made a complete turn around the middle 😅😁
Note: 12 of my poems including The Cabin In The Woods, Dear Dad, Self Love and The Moon are now available and can be downloaded at Google Play Books, Google Books and Google Android Play Store. Link is given below, feel free to go and browse there as well. 😇
https://play.google.com/store/books/details?id=6odOEAAAQBAJ
Happy reading 🙃
The introvert writer © 2021
Love the poem as well as the photographs.Thanks a lot for sharing.Take care.🙏😊🌹
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Thank you so much for such a warm compliment 😇🌸
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My pleasure.🙏😊🌹
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😇🙏💝
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You’re doing amazing work, Daphny. It couldn’t happen to a better person.
This story reads like truth at the end. Is it real?
Even if it isn’t I adore it. Thanks so much for sharing it. Keep going my sweets. Keep shattering ceilings. You Go, girl. xoxo
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Aww.. Thank you so much Selma for your kind words and for always being so encouraging, it means a lot 😇💖
No it’s not real, it is inspired by a cabin I saw in one of my friends photo 😁
#This poem was suppose to be a warm and cozy one but while writing it I changed the plot in the middle 😅
So glad you liked it 🙂❤
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Love it. 👏
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Thank you 🙂😁
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The first half of the poem attracted me towards the house. What beauty! But the second half takes an unexpected route, repelling me away. I love poems which have contrasts!
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Haha… The original idea was to let this poem a warm and cozy one but as I started writing it I somehow managed to change the plot, really glad you liked it 🙂🤗
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Came here to say this
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Haha… Well thank you very much!
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(●’◡’●)
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😁🌸
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It is a beautiful poem that tells a story and conveys various emotions
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Thank you so much Luisa 🙂💖
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🙏💕🙏💕🙏
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😇🌸❣️
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Amazing picture click. True & warm poem written you. So smart! Really best recommend that pic.✍️
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Thank you so much Raj 😇🌸
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Welcome 🌷Daphny. Iam so glad .
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😇🙏❤️🌸
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Nice, even though it took a turn, I still felt the experience. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you so much, thats very kind of you to say. Really gald you felt the experience 😊❣️
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Happy to support! Now I feel like I could use a get-a-way, lol.
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That means a lot 😊
Umm.. Okay this is kinda embarrassing but my sense of humour isn’t that good and I have a hard time understanding things so if you don’t mind can you elaborate it please 😌
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No worries, I’m the same way, not much os a sense of humor and I usually don’t get jokes. People think I”m way too serious. I was just stating that the images along with the poem are beautiful. I’ve been working so much I just need to get away to some where quiet and peaceful to relax.
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Thank goodness I’m not alone 😄
Oo… I get it now, yeah give yourself a lil treat and relax. Sometimes you need a bit of quite and peace and a me time 😊
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😁💟
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😁❣️
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Lovely cabin, I would love to relax over there. Daphny,Your poem looks real story. Your start is wonderful ,end part crafted in contrast. I like such poems as well.💕👍🏻
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Thank you so much, you’re too kind. Really gald that you liked it 😇❣️
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Most welcome dear Daphny 🌺☺️
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😇❤️❣️
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❣️♥️
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While this not cozy, it provides an immersive atmosphere and sense of mystery that my mountain girl self loves!
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Aww.. Thank you so very much Jaya, that means so much to me 🥰❤️
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A wonderful poem, Daphny. A bit suspenseful and much intrigue. Lovely, my friend. ❤️🥰
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Thank you so much Jeff, this was so much fun to write 😁❤️
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You’re most welcome, Daphny. Always. I could feel that you had fun with this one, as did we. 😀🥰❤️
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Thank you thank you 😁❤️❣️🌸
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Such an amazing piem. I could feel the chills of ghosts. I love it
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Thank you o much 😊
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love this Daphny 💖
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Thank you so much Cindy! 🙂💖
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pleasure!💖
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😇❤️
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😻🤗
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I understand… the poem writes itself! Great poem Daphny
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That is so very true, thank you so much Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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